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Figure at the Window
By Salvador Dali
About Me
- Vagabond
- I'm half Colombian and half Chilien. I love my boyfriend dearly, and I love my family. My sisters are my bestfriends, and my bestfriend should've been my sister. I have a lot to talk about, and try the best I can to display that in my writing.
3 comments:
i really enjoyeed this. i cant exactly relate to moving from place to place but i can relate to the lesson in which you learned about making life how you want it to be. your an awesome writer,
I though your story was great and the lesson to be learned from it is so important. The only time I moved was when I was five and it wasn't a big move like yours so I can't really relate in that way but I've had plenty of instances where my life could have so much easier if I had just made it that way. Great story, the only criticism would be the flow of the story. It was very choppy. Good job overall though.
Your graphics went with your text very nicely! The lesson you have learned about dealing with change will serve you well throughout your life. Thanks for posting!
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